Wednesday, January 16, 2013

ARC Review: Nobody But Us by Kristin Halbrook

Nobody But Us by Kristin Halbrook
Published: January 29, 2013
Publisher:
HarperTeen
Pages:
304
My Rating: 
2 of 5 stars

Synopsis: Bonnie and Clyde meets IF I STAY in this additively heart-wrenching story of two desperate teenagers on the run from their pasts.

They’re young. They’re in love. They’re on the run.

Zoe wants to save Will as much as Will wants to save Zoe. When Will turns eighteen, they decide to run away together. But they never expected their escape to be so fraught with danger....

When the whole world is after you, sometimes it seems like you can’t run fast enough.

Nobody But Us, told in alternating perspectives from Will and Zoe, is an unflinching novel, in turns heartbreaking and hopeful, about survival, choices, and love...and how having love doesn’t always mean that you get a happy ending. Described as “beautiful, heartbreaking, and exhilarating” by Kody Keplinger, author of The DUFF, Nobody But Us will prove irresistible to fans of Nina Lacour, Jenny Han, and Sara Zarr.


My Review: When I saw this book being compared to If I Stay I thought I would really like it since I loved If I Stay. This book was nothing like If I Stay. I'm not sure why it's being compared to it. I guess it's kind of like Bonnie and Clyde but a more toned down version.

I was very close to giving this book one star and I think two stars is a little generous but I think that the writing deserves some points. Alternating point of views are sometimes really confusing to read and sometimes the characters sound so similar that I can't tell which character is narrating but I think it worked pretty well in Nobody But Us. I wasn't a big fan of Will's point of view since he used words like "ain't" and "gonna" but at least I could tell when it wasn't Zoe's point of view.

That was the only thing I kind of liked about the book.

What really put me off was the romance. Will and Zoe's relationship was unhealthy. Over the course of the book Will beats up at least three people for Zoe. One of those people is her father. Now I understand that Zoe's father was abusive but if Zoe hadn't stopped him then Will probably would have killed that man. That all happened in the first or second chapter. 

At one point he beat up his friend because he didn't like what he was saying. Then later he beats up another person that was harassing Zoe but instead of asking if she was alright Will asks if she was flirting with the guy. He apologizes later for making her afraid that he might hit her because she flinched when he went to touch her. Then Zoe is sorry that she flinched when he went to touch her. 

Later in the book Zoe finally starts to have a backbone but then she hits her boyfriend that has anger issues and then she wants him to hit her. That is not a good relationship. People should not be hitting their boyfriend/girlfriend. Even though Will never hit Zoe I have no doubt that eventually he would hit her since his behavior has all kinds of red flags.

I also don't understand how Will and Zoe weren't caught while they were traveling. They acted so suspicious in restaurants and everywhere that they went. Zoe was practically clueless that the police would come after them. Their plan for when they got to Vegas had so many flaws that it was practically one giant hole.

I didn't really like the ending either since in Zoe's eyes Will is still perfect for her and she still believes her relationship with him was healthy. At one point I thought that Zoe would realize that she was just like her mother in almost every way but she kind of just avoids those kinds of thoughts.

I expected so much more form this book and it just didn't deliver. I thought I would be reduced to tears at the end because it was supposed to be "heartbreaking" but I felt relieved that it was over and that I wouldn't have to deal with Will and Zoe's messed up relationship anymore.

*I won this from a Goodreads giveaway.

11 comments:

Reya and Allie said...

I've heard so many good things about this book too. I will probably still end up reading it but your review will remind me to keep a clear head while reading it. Thanks for sharing your opinion!

-Reya

Lottie Eve said...

I still want to read this book but your review reminds me to keep a look-out for the red flags :)

Ariella Blake said...

Ah.. so sad you didn't like it.. It sounds like a bad relationship for both of them.. but they're teens and they don't know any better (I think).. I will still read this but I might find the abusive stuff disturbing. Lovely review, Erika!

-Ariella @ Secrets of Lost Words

Erika A said...

I know I've seen so many good reviews for this book but I just couldn't get past how disturbing I found their relationship.

Erika A said...

@Lottie
I can't wait to see what you think when you read it. I wonder if you'll have the same problems with it that I had.

Erika A said...

I really wanted to like it too. I hate it when I get my hopes up and then the book isn't as good as I thought it would be. Will is 18 (so technically an adult) and Zoe is 15.

siriusyareader said...

I actually loved this book. I know their relationship was unhealthy but I thought it was real. They really loved each other.

Erika A said...

I'm glad you enjoyed the book! I think its either hit or miss for most people.

Brandi Kosiner said...

I liked it more than you did, but I certainly see where you are coming from. Def agree with you that its nothing like If I stay.
Brandi from Blkosiner’s Book Blog

Erika A said...

I think I went into it expecting so much more and that's why I didn't really enjoy it. I'm glad you liked it though!

Starflowerz17 said...

I really want to read this book, but now I am kind of skeptical. I think I will, just so I have my own take on it. Thanks for honest review :)

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